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Notes about place

As a writer, think today about the outside world – the weather, the view, the ground beneath. Maybe you’re in your bedroom, take a moment to open the window. What does the sky look like? What can you hear? What can you see? Describe it. But don’t describe what you think is there, describe what’s actually there. I try and do this often, making short notes, some of which I can use in later stories. Some are terrible and useless. But that’s okay – normally I don’t show them to anyone so it doesn’t matter!

Here are a couple of notes I’ve written over the last two days:

The sky a watercolour wash….The cherry blossom light as the clouds behind…The evening the sun came out, illuminating the opposite hill, scrub skin like a fallen dragon’s…The sky almost as dark as the charred moorland beneath, the yellow of the gorse is the transition between earth and sky…daffodils tiny suns

Now it’s your turn.

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New page – getting published

Yay – I got the getting published part of the site up.  And the designer is working hard as I improve this blog day by day.

Check out the getting published section!  And look forward to more writing updates…

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Time off

Being really sick makes you stop for a moment.  Sure, it’s not the way I’d recommend getting your imagination working, but it did get me thinking as I lay there the last couple of days with flu.  See, I had my phone off, I didn’t check email, and I wasn’t watching TV.  I think sometimes it’s a good idea to just let your imagination have some time to itself – maybe give yourself an hour without phone/internet/TV/anything that distracts you.  Lie around.  Listen to music.  Stare at the ceiling.  Whatever.  Just let yourself be and see what travels through your mind.  Reacquaint yourself with your imagination.  I had to get sick to remind myself to slow down and take time off.  But, wow, did I get a great new idea for a book out of it…

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A whole new design

I’m enjoying writing this blog so much that I’ve decided to get a web designer to help me put it all together so it works really well.  I want to have a section on how to get published, another quickstart set of tips, links to more writers and more thoughts about writing.  Plus, I’d like to do author interviews and photo prompts, alongside all the writer tips for you.

Today, I’m staying in a hotel in the centre of London.  London is my home town, so it’s the first time I’ve ever done this – looked at the city as a tourist might.  It’s been making me think about looking at stories from a new angle.  London is filled with tiny quirky streets, cobbled corners, busy cafes, packed galleries, and loads of pigeons.  As a tourist here, I’m noticing the details – details I often just take for granted as I rush about visiting one friend or the other, or trying to get work done.

How can you look at what you’re writing from a whole new angle?  You don’t have to stay in a fancy hotel in Soho (although, I admit, it’s pretty nice!) but perhaps you can try your story from a different character’s perspective.  Today, I’m looking at London as a tourist, perhaps I could look at London in my imagination through the eyes of one of those gallery goers, or even through the eyes of a pigeon! 

So, take one of you characters and rewrite a scene through their eyes.  What do you learn???

I’ll keep you posted on the new web design.

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For Bailey

In the selection of quickstart ideas on this site, number five suggests writing a prose poem.  This is a great form for those of you who have written stories and who want to try poetry, or those of you who’ve written poetry and who want to try something new.  I wanted to use today’s post to explain prose poetry a little more…

Simply put, a prose poem is a poem that doesn’t have line breaks. It reads like prose on the page, but like poetry in the language used – think about rhythm, sound, internal rhyme, and imagery, just like you would if you were writing a poem.

Remember:

  1. There are no rules of form or rhyme.
  2. Think about an image that makes you want to write.  Why does it?
  3. Keep in mind, you’re writing the poem in sentences and fragments of sentences but you don’t have to think about punctuation.
  4. As you write, use language that is poetic – can you find internal rhymes or rhythms to make the words sing? 

When you’ve finished the prose poem read it outloud to yourself.  Have you brought an image and an emotional truth together?  Do you need to do this, do you think?  Does the prose poem work for some reason that is hard to explain but you just know it does?  If so, then you’ve done it, you’ve written a prose poem.

If I’ve got ten minutes, I chose a word from the dictionary and use it as a title for a prose poem.  I try to let the words flow freely, I try not to get in the way of what I’m writing.  I use the word and see if it brings an image to mind that I can capture on the page.  Ten minutes isn’t enough to write a finished or polished piece, but it gives me a little writing time in an otherwise busy day.

Today, I’m packing to head on a four month trip.  I look forward to writing lots, to taking some photos that’ll inspire you to write and to meeting readers and writers on the road.  First stop, Toronto.  Maybe I’ll have time to write a rough prose poem on the plane… now there’s an idea…

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