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For Bailey

In the selection of quickstart ideas on this site, number five suggests writing a prose poem.  This is a great form for those of you who have written stories and who want to try poetry, or those of you who’ve written poetry and who want to try something new.  I wanted to use today’s post to explain prose poetry a little more…

Simply put, a prose poem is a poem that doesn’t have line breaks. It reads like prose on the page, but like poetry in the language used – think about rhythm, sound, internal rhyme, and imagery, just like you would if you were writing a poem.

Remember:

  1. There are no rules of form or rhyme.
  2. Think about an image that makes you want to write.  Why does it?
  3. Keep in mind, you’re writing the poem in sentences and fragments of sentences but you don’t have to think about punctuation.
  4. As you write, use language that is poetic – can you find internal rhymes or rhythms to make the words sing? 

When you’ve finished the prose poem read it outloud to yourself.  Have you brought an image and an emotional truth together?  Do you need to do this, do you think?  Does the prose poem work for some reason that is hard to explain but you just know it does?  If so, then you’ve done it, you’ve written a prose poem.

If I’ve got ten minutes, I chose a word from the dictionary and use it as a title for a prose poem.  I try to let the words flow freely, I try not to get in the way of what I’m writing.  I use the word and see if it brings an image to mind that I can capture on the page.  Ten minutes isn’t enough to write a finished or polished piece, but it gives me a little writing time in an otherwise busy day.

Today, I’m packing to head on a four month trip.  I look forward to writing lots, to taking some photos that’ll inspire you to write and to meeting readers and writers on the road.  First stop, Toronto.  Maybe I’ll have time to write a rough prose poem on the plane… now there’s an idea…

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Lord Asquith School

Today I’m talking to a couple of school groups at Lord Asquith School in Asquith. Right now, I’m with the Grade 8s, 9s and 11s. We’re going to – as a group – come up with a couple of suggestions for things that got them writing:

Think about an event you were at and write about it

Something someone said to you….what does it make you think of

Think of different emotions – how you feel happy, something that makes you mad, something that made you cry

Things you’ve heard in the news – like the Haiti earthquake, the Olympics – you could imagine you were there and write about it

Write a poem about Remembrance Day…

Get writing.

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Writing writing writing

Several years ago, I took up cross-country skiing. The place I live, Saskatoon, is flat and snowy, and very sunny, so cross-country skiing was a way to get outside, to enjoy some sunshine, and to move across the frozen landscape. After falling over many times, getting covered in snow, and weeping once with frustration as how windy and miserable the whole experience was, I began to get the hang of it. I learned how to glide on my skis, moving gracefully (most of the time) and with pleasure (nearly all of the time).

Then, over the last year, I stopped skiing. I put the skis aside and, although I kept meaning to go, I just couldn’t quite get myself to go out and do it. Until this weekend. This weekend, I went to Waskesiu, Saskatchewan, with some friends. We rented a cabin, packed up good food, took bathing suits for the hot tub, and we waxed our skis. Yesterday afternoon, I found myself with my ski boots on, skis over my shoulder, the wide, white trail leading through the poplars ahead of me.

Sometimes writing just flows. It feels easy to get words on the page. Stories and ideas tap from my fingers into sentences and paragraphs and I feel confident and assured that what I’m writing is worth putting onto paper. But other times, writing feels stiff and difficult. The blank page feels like a snowy field, impossible to traverse. I don’t know how to move forward with a story. I’m stuck and out of practice.

Yesterday morning, I put on my skis and wobbled to the start of the track. It wasn’t easy at first, but soon I was gliding again. I wasn’t as fast as I once was; nor was I as confident. But the more I ski, the easier it’ll get. The more I write, the more fluid the sentence become. Writing isn’t always easy, but for me, opening a new blank document in Word is like getting on my ski boots. I just have to get on and do it.

Start a story or a poem with the words: Snow fell like feathers…

Or, free write for ten minutes on the subject of travel

Fill some white space.

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Words and phrases

Often when I’m writing, I try and find words that are clear and that express what I’m trying to say elegantly.  I don’t always succeed and sometimes, years later, I realise there was a better word, I just didn’t think of it at the right time.  Does that happen to you?  You think of the right word or the right thing to say, but it’s way too late to say it?

I want you to imagine you’re in the middle of an argument with someone important to you.  Write down all the things you say, and all the things the other person says.  Use lines of dialogue with very little description or action around them – think of this more like a play than a story.  Then go through the dialogue you’ve written and take three of the things YOU’VE SAID.  Can you change them?  Can you make those words even better?  Can you reword it so you say what you want to say?  This is the moment to take the opportunity to SAY IT RIGHT!

They say all writing is rewriting.  I’ve been thinking about that recently and so this exercise seemed like a good one for today.  Get rewriting.  Say it how you wish you could.

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Movie trailers

Someone directed me to this on youtube: A trailer for Life on the Refrigerator Door

It made me think how great it would be if you wrote a trailer for your favourite book.  Imagine how to turn your favourite book into a movie.  Think about which bits of the book you need to keep, and which bits you’d have to cut.  Then try and write a few lines to capture the essence of your movie – you could even match it up with photos like in the trailer for my book.

Now, all we need is a real movie deal!

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