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8 more writing tips

I love Neil Gaiman’s work and so I was delighted to see he’d written 8 writing tips for The Guardian. I’m really enjoying reading tips and thoughts from other writers at the moment.  It’s helping me get words on the page and shape my ideas.  Number 6 is particularly helpful for the book I’m having to let go of now…

1 Write.

2 Put one word after another. Find the right word, put it down.

3 Finish what you’re writing. Whatever you have to do to finish it, finish it.

4 Put it aside. Read it pretending you’ve never read it before. Show it to friends whose opinion you respect and who like the kind of thing that this is.

5 Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong.

6 Fix it. Remember that, sooner or later, before it ever reaches perfection, you will have to let it go and move on and start to write the next thing. Perfection is like chasing the horizon. Keep moving.

7 Laugh at your own jokes.

8 The main rule of writing is that if you do it with enough assurance and confidence, you’re allowed to do whatever you like. (That may be a rule for life as well as for writing. But it’s definitely true for writing.) So write your story as it needs to be written. Write it ­honestly, and tell it as best you can. I’m not sure that there are any other rules. Not ones that matter.

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For Bailey

In the selection of quickstart ideas on this site, number five suggests writing a prose poem.  This is a great form for those of you who have written stories and who want to try poetry, or those of you who’ve written poetry and who want to try something new.  I wanted to use today’s post to explain prose poetry a little more…

Simply put, a prose poem is a poem that doesn’t have line breaks. It reads like prose on the page, but like poetry in the language used – think about rhythm, sound, internal rhyme, and imagery, just like you would if you were writing a poem.

Remember:

  1. There are no rules of form or rhyme.
  2. Think about an image that makes you want to write.  Why does it?
  3. Keep in mind, you’re writing the poem in sentences and fragments of sentences but you don’t have to think about punctuation.
  4. As you write, use language that is poetic – can you find internal rhymes or rhythms to make the words sing? 

When you’ve finished the prose poem read it outloud to yourself.  Have you brought an image and an emotional truth together?  Do you need to do this, do you think?  Does the prose poem work for some reason that is hard to explain but you just know it does?  If so, then you’ve done it, you’ve written a prose poem.

If I’ve got ten minutes, I chose a word from the dictionary and use it as a title for a prose poem.  I try to let the words flow freely, I try not to get in the way of what I’m writing.  I use the word and see if it brings an image to mind that I can capture on the page.  Ten minutes isn’t enough to write a finished or polished piece, but it gives me a little writing time in an otherwise busy day.

Today, I’m packing to head on a four month trip.  I look forward to writing lots, to taking some photos that’ll inspire you to write and to meeting readers and writers on the road.  First stop, Toronto.  Maybe I’ll have time to write a rough prose poem on the plane… now there’s an idea…

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Lord Asquith School

Today I’m talking to a couple of school groups at Lord Asquith School in Asquith. Right now, I’m with the Grade 8s, 9s and 11s. We’re going to – as a group – come up with a couple of suggestions for things that got them writing:

Think about an event you were at and write about it

Something someone said to you….what does it make you think of

Think of different emotions – how you feel happy, something that makes you mad, something that made you cry

Things you’ve heard in the news – like the Haiti earthquake, the Olympics – you could imagine you were there and write about it

Write a poem about Remembrance Day…

Get writing.

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A little something for the weekend

I’d like you to open your ears this weekend. You’d be amazed at what people say around you – and how inspirational it can be. So, have a listen to what people are talking about. Notice if someone says something extraordinary or weird or funny or strange or delightful or scary or fantastic over the next couple of days.

Listen to the people who are talking to you, but also to the people who are talking around you. There are words filling the air and your job as a writer is to get a hold of those words and wrestle them onto the page. Once you’ve heard something great, get it down on paper. It might be a sentence or maybe two. Once I heard a guy say to his friend in the park, “Have you any idea what it was like to be in jail for eighteen years? It was great.” Really, honestly, that’s what he said.

When you’ve got your sentence down, see where it leads. Is there a story there? A poem? A prose poem?

Get listening.

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Writing photo prompt

What does this make you think of?

Take a look at this caged animal.  What does it make you feel/think?  Could you use this photo as a writing prompt?  Look at the photo and then start a story about this creature.  Let me know how you get on!

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