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8 more writing tips

I love Neil Gaiman’s work and so I was delighted to see he’d written 8 writing tips for The Guardian. I’m really enjoying reading tips and thoughts from other writers at the moment.  It’s helping me get words on the page and shape my ideas.  Number 6 is particularly helpful for the book I’m having to let go of now…

1 Write.

2 Put one word after another. Find the right word, put it down.

3 Finish what you’re writing. Whatever you have to do to finish it, finish it.

4 Put it aside. Read it pretending you’ve never read it before. Show it to friends whose opinion you respect and who like the kind of thing that this is.

5 Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong.

6 Fix it. Remember that, sooner or later, before it ever reaches perfection, you will have to let it go and move on and start to write the next thing. Perfection is like chasing the horizon. Keep moving.

7 Laugh at your own jokes.

8 The main rule of writing is that if you do it with enough assurance and confidence, you’re allowed to do whatever you like. (That may be a rule for life as well as for writing. But it’s definitely true for writing.) So write your story as it needs to be written. Write it ­honestly, and tell it as best you can. I’m not sure that there are any other rules. Not ones that matter.

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A whole new design

I’m enjoying writing this blog so much that I’ve decided to get a web designer to help me put it all together so it works really well.  I want to have a section on how to get published, another quickstart set of tips, links to more writers and more thoughts about writing.  Plus, I’d like to do author interviews and photo prompts, alongside all the writer tips for you.

Today, I’m staying in a hotel in the centre of London.  London is my home town, so it’s the first time I’ve ever done this – looked at the city as a tourist might.  It’s been making me think about looking at stories from a new angle.  London is filled with tiny quirky streets, cobbled corners, busy cafes, packed galleries, and loads of pigeons.  As a tourist here, I’m noticing the details – details I often just take for granted as I rush about visiting one friend or the other, or trying to get work done.

How can you look at what you’re writing from a whole new angle?  You don’t have to stay in a fancy hotel in Soho (although, I admit, it’s pretty nice!) but perhaps you can try your story from a different character’s perspective.  Today, I’m looking at London as a tourist, perhaps I could look at London in my imagination through the eyes of one of those gallery goers, or even through the eyes of a pigeon! 

So, take one of you characters and rewrite a scene through their eyes.  What do you learn???

I’ll keep you posted on the new web design.

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For Bailey

In the selection of quickstart ideas on this site, number five suggests writing a prose poem.  This is a great form for those of you who have written stories and who want to try poetry, or those of you who’ve written poetry and who want to try something new.  I wanted to use today’s post to explain prose poetry a little more…

Simply put, a prose poem is a poem that doesn’t have line breaks. It reads like prose on the page, but like poetry in the language used – think about rhythm, sound, internal rhyme, and imagery, just like you would if you were writing a poem.

Remember:

  1. There are no rules of form or rhyme.
  2. Think about an image that makes you want to write.  Why does it?
  3. Keep in mind, you’re writing the poem in sentences and fragments of sentences but you don’t have to think about punctuation.
  4. As you write, use language that is poetic – can you find internal rhymes or rhythms to make the words sing? 

When you’ve finished the prose poem read it outloud to yourself.  Have you brought an image and an emotional truth together?  Do you need to do this, do you think?  Does the prose poem work for some reason that is hard to explain but you just know it does?  If so, then you’ve done it, you’ve written a prose poem.

If I’ve got ten minutes, I chose a word from the dictionary and use it as a title for a prose poem.  I try to let the words flow freely, I try not to get in the way of what I’m writing.  I use the word and see if it brings an image to mind that I can capture on the page.  Ten minutes isn’t enough to write a finished or polished piece, but it gives me a little writing time in an otherwise busy day.

Today, I’m packing to head on a four month trip.  I look forward to writing lots, to taking some photos that’ll inspire you to write and to meeting readers and writers on the road.  First stop, Toronto.  Maybe I’ll have time to write a rough prose poem on the plane… now there’s an idea…

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Valentine’s Day

Is there someone who you are secretly in love with?  Someone who you could never tell about your feelings?  Someone who you think about even though you know nothing will or nothing could ever happen between you?

Write a letter to that person.  Write everything that you’ll never say.  Don’t hold back  a word.

Because you’re never going to give this letter to the person you love.

And then put that letter in a file on your computer called FOR MY EYES ONLY.

That’s what you have to do every time you write – write as if no-one’s ever going to read it.  Be honest and true.  Sometimes the pieces you write will go into FOR MY EYES ONLY.  And sometimes they’ll go out into the world to be read.  You’ll feel vulnerable and exposed.  It’s always going to feel like that as a writer.  And that’s okay.

Happy Valentine’s Day.

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Get into character

Here’s an exercise to help you get into your character’s head!

Chose one of the following people and answer the following questions as that character…A prisoner; A monk; A sales person; A compulsive shopper; A person who owns a boat; A jogger

What’s your name?

How old are you now?

What do you look like?

What is your favourite thing to do when no-one else is around?

Tell me a memory from when you were six – how did this change you?

Where do you work?

If you had one week left to live, what would you do?

Tell me a memory from when you were fifteen – how did this change you?

Who do you hate? Why?

Tell me a secret you’ve told no-one.

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