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8 more writing tips

I love Neil Gaiman’s work and so I was delighted to see he’d written 8 writing tips for The Guardian. I’m really enjoying reading tips and thoughts from other writers at the moment.  It’s helping me get words on the page and shape my ideas.  Number 6 is particularly helpful for the book I’m having to let go of now…

1 Write.

2 Put one word after another. Find the right word, put it down.

3 Finish what you’re writing. Whatever you have to do to finish it, finish it.

4 Put it aside. Read it pretending you’ve never read it before. Show it to friends whose opinion you respect and who like the kind of thing that this is.

5 Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong.

6 Fix it. Remember that, sooner or later, before it ever reaches perfection, you will have to let it go and move on and start to write the next thing. Perfection is like chasing the horizon. Keep moving.

7 Laugh at your own jokes.

8 The main rule of writing is that if you do it with enough assurance and confidence, you’re allowed to do whatever you like. (That may be a rule for life as well as for writing. But it’s definitely true for writing.) So write your story as it needs to be written. Write it ­honestly, and tell it as best you can. I’m not sure that there are any other rules. Not ones that matter.

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Finding found poems

Go to your five favourite websites.  From each one take three sentences that stand out for you.

These are the words you’re going to use to put together your poem.  Take the words and shape them, wrestle with them, turn them into something new.  A found poem.

Take a look at poets.org to learn more about found poetry.  They sum up what you’re going to be doing with your three sentences from each website when they say ‘a found poem is the literary equivalent of a collage.’

So gather the words you’re going to use then put them together to create something new.  Let your imagination and your five favourite websites help you rewrite the world.

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New page – getting published

Yay – I got the getting published part of the site up.  And the designer is working hard as I improve this blog day by day.

Check out the getting published section!  And look forward to more writing updates…

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A whole new design

I’m enjoying writing this blog so much that I’ve decided to get a web designer to help me put it all together so it works really well.  I want to have a section on how to get published, another quickstart set of tips, links to more writers and more thoughts about writing.  Plus, I’d like to do author interviews and photo prompts, alongside all the writer tips for you.

Today, I’m staying in a hotel in the centre of London.  London is my home town, so it’s the first time I’ve ever done this – looked at the city as a tourist might.  It’s been making me think about looking at stories from a new angle.  London is filled with tiny quirky streets, cobbled corners, busy cafes, packed galleries, and loads of pigeons.  As a tourist here, I’m noticing the details – details I often just take for granted as I rush about visiting one friend or the other, or trying to get work done.

How can you look at what you’re writing from a whole new angle?  You don’t have to stay in a fancy hotel in Soho (although, I admit, it’s pretty nice!) but perhaps you can try your story from a different character’s perspective.  Today, I’m looking at London as a tourist, perhaps I could look at London in my imagination through the eyes of one of those gallery goers, or even through the eyes of a pigeon! 

So, take one of you characters and rewrite a scene through their eyes.  What do you learn???

I’ll keep you posted on the new web design.

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Words and phrases

Often when I’m writing, I try and find words that are clear and that express what I’m trying to say elegantly.  I don’t always succeed and sometimes, years later, I realise there was a better word, I just didn’t think of it at the right time.  Does that happen to you?  You think of the right word or the right thing to say, but it’s way too late to say it?

I want you to imagine you’re in the middle of an argument with someone important to you.  Write down all the things you say, and all the things the other person says.  Use lines of dialogue with very little description or action around them – think of this more like a play than a story.  Then go through the dialogue you’ve written and take three of the things YOU’VE SAID.  Can you change them?  Can you make those words even better?  Can you reword it so you say what you want to say?  This is the moment to take the opportunity to SAY IT RIGHT!

They say all writing is rewriting.  I’ve been thinking about that recently and so this exercise seemed like a good one for today.  Get rewriting.  Say it how you wish you could.

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