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Notes about place

As a writer, think today about the outside world – the weather, the view, the ground beneath. Maybe you’re in your bedroom, take a moment to open the window. What does the sky look like? What can you hear? What can you see? Describe it. But don’t describe what you think is there, describe what’s actually there. I try and do this often, making short notes, some of which I can use in later stories. Some are terrible and useless. But that’s okay – normally I don’t show them to anyone so it doesn’t matter!

Here are a couple of notes I’ve written over the last two days:

The sky a watercolour wash….The cherry blossom light as the clouds behind…The evening the sun came out, illuminating the opposite hill, scrub skin like a fallen dragon’s…The sky almost as dark as the charred moorland beneath, the yellow of the gorse is the transition between earth and sky…daffodils tiny suns

Now it’s your turn.

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A whole new design

I’m enjoying writing this blog so much that I’ve decided to get a web designer to help me put it all together so it works really well.  I want to have a section on how to get published, another quickstart set of tips, links to more writers and more thoughts about writing.  Plus, I’d like to do author interviews and photo prompts, alongside all the writer tips for you.

Today, I’m staying in a hotel in the centre of London.  London is my home town, so it’s the first time I’ve ever done this – looked at the city as a tourist might.  It’s been making me think about looking at stories from a new angle.  London is filled with tiny quirky streets, cobbled corners, busy cafes, packed galleries, and loads of pigeons.  As a tourist here, I’m noticing the details – details I often just take for granted as I rush about visiting one friend or the other, or trying to get work done.

How can you look at what you’re writing from a whole new angle?  You don’t have to stay in a fancy hotel in Soho (although, I admit, it’s pretty nice!) but perhaps you can try your story from a different character’s perspective.  Today, I’m looking at London as a tourist, perhaps I could look at London in my imagination through the eyes of one of those gallery goers, or even through the eyes of a pigeon! 

So, take one of you characters and rewrite a scene through their eyes.  What do you learn???

I’ll keep you posted on the new web design.

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The Everafter

I’ve just finished reading The Everafter by Amy Huntley . The main character, Madison, is dead and she finds her way back to her life through the objects she lost when she was alive. It’s a romance, a mystery and a thoughtful book about letting go.

What objects make you reflect on your life?  Could you chose one object and write about the memory you have because of it?  Where does it come from?  What does it make you feel?  Can you write the memory down using all your senses, like Amy Huntley does, to really bring that moment back to life?

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Lord Asquith School

Today I’m talking to a couple of school groups at Lord Asquith School in Asquith. Right now, I’m with the Grade 8s, 9s and 11s. We’re going to – as a group – come up with a couple of suggestions for things that got them writing:

Think about an event you were at and write about it

Something someone said to you….what does it make you think of

Think of different emotions – how you feel happy, something that makes you mad, something that made you cry

Things you’ve heard in the news – like the Haiti earthquake, the Olympics – you could imagine you were there and write about it

Write a poem about Remembrance Day…

Get writing.

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Writing writing writing

Several years ago, I took up cross-country skiing. The place I live, Saskatoon, is flat and snowy, and very sunny, so cross-country skiing was a way to get outside, to enjoy some sunshine, and to move across the frozen landscape. After falling over many times, getting covered in snow, and weeping once with frustration as how windy and miserable the whole experience was, I began to get the hang of it. I learned how to glide on my skis, moving gracefully (most of the time) and with pleasure (nearly all of the time).

Then, over the last year, I stopped skiing. I put the skis aside and, although I kept meaning to go, I just couldn’t quite get myself to go out and do it. Until this weekend. This weekend, I went to Waskesiu, Saskatchewan, with some friends. We rented a cabin, packed up good food, took bathing suits for the hot tub, and we waxed our skis. Yesterday afternoon, I found myself with my ski boots on, skis over my shoulder, the wide, white trail leading through the poplars ahead of me.

Sometimes writing just flows. It feels easy to get words on the page. Stories and ideas tap from my fingers into sentences and paragraphs and I feel confident and assured that what I’m writing is worth putting onto paper. But other times, writing feels stiff and difficult. The blank page feels like a snowy field, impossible to traverse. I don’t know how to move forward with a story. I’m stuck and out of practice.

Yesterday morning, I put on my skis and wobbled to the start of the track. It wasn’t easy at first, but soon I was gliding again. I wasn’t as fast as I once was; nor was I as confident. But the more I ski, the easier it’ll get. The more I write, the more fluid the sentence become. Writing isn’t always easy, but for me, opening a new blank document in Word is like getting on my ski boots. I just have to get on and do it.

Start a story or a poem with the words: Snow fell like feathers…

Or, free write for ten minutes on the subject of travel

Fill some white space.

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